2013. 6. 7.

에세이 샘플 5 (유학생, GPA 3.65, SAT 1620 (리딩 430), Syracuse, Penn State 합격, UC Davis/Irvine 대기자 명단)

이 에세이는 중위권 학교를 도전하는 영어실력이 약간 부족한 학생의 에세이다. 이렇듯, 학생의 실력에 맞게 에세이의 수준을 조절해줘야 한다. 무조건 잘 써준 에세이가 좋은 게 아니다. 주제도 평범한 요리 얘기다.

Since little, I’ve loved everything about food, both eating and cooking. Whenever my mother was in the kitchen cooking meals, I would stay by her side and ask every detail about the cooking procedure. At my home stay in the US, the food became an issue as I didn’t get easily accustomed to American food, on top of my home-stay guardian not being a gourmet chef (sometimes the food she provides makes me wonder what ingredients she could have possibly used). Especially on weekends, the home-stay kids had to take care of their own meals. Being in such situation, I was prompted to venture into being the weekend cook for my housemates. After acting as the weekend cook for a several times, one valuable thing I learned is how to make the most of resources available, no matter how scant they are.

One day, I had a craving for Korean-style fried rice. So I looked into the refrigerator; eggs, leftover spam, butter, and carrots were the only things I could find useful for my dish. I chopped up the carrots into little bite pieces while heating up the frying pan with a chunk of butter in it. I then poured everything in the pan, rice, spam, and egg and started stirring. I put the heat into medium in order not to burn the rice. If I think about it, there is not much into this fried rice. But given the situation, it was the best meal for that weekend.

On another occasion, I found eggs (there were always eggs, thank goodness!), zucchini, miso paste, and tofu. Again, I chopped up the zucchini into chunks, put on the beaten eggs with diced green onions, and then fried it in the pan until I got golden fried zucchini. Miso soup was really easy. I only had to boil the paste with chopped up tofu. Once again, with miso soup, fried zucchini, kimchi, and white rice, the weekend supper for the housemates were ready and it was a blast for kids who had been fed up with greasy cafeteria food throughout the week.

At first, I thought cooking itself was a joy in itself. The process itself, as well as the final output, was some form of art in my opinion. But as I started making meals more and more for my friends and family, cooking became less of an culinary art but more of service to the people around me. Cooking is no extraordinary merit, but I feel proud of myself when I see them enjoying my food. I could see now why my mother used to say with a tender smile, “I don’t have to eat. I get stuffed just by looking at you kids eating my food.”

에세이 샘플 4 (미국공립, GPA 4.8, ACT 36, Vanderbilt $65,000 장학금, Carlton$50,000 장학금)

이 학생은 성적은 아주 우수했으나 다른 활동면에서 아주 큰 특색이 없었다. 그저 교회의 봉사활동만 열심히 했을 뿐 다른 두드러진 면은 없었다. 이렇게 학과목 이외에 특이한 사항이 없는 경우 아이비는 쉽지 않다. 아래처럼 에세이에서 특이한 취미(수정과)와 평범한 활동(크로스컨트리)을 엮어서 독특한 에세이로 어필을 해보려고 했지만 소용이 없었다. 이 예는 에세이 하나로 모든 것을 해결할 수 없다는 걸 보여주며, 일단 공부만 잘 하면 Top 10 리버럴 아츠 칼리지 (명문 단과대학) 또는 Top 20급 대학은 갈 수 있다는 걸 보여준다.

The familiar pungent smell fills my nostrils as I peel and chop the unsightly root. As I add the freshly chopped ginger to a pot of boiling water, I shake my head in wonder at the idea of this bitter root being the main ingredient in my favorite Korean dessert drink, sujeonggwa.

It was the summer before sophomore year. At my own discretion and at the advice of my counselor and parents, I made the decision to quit soccer—the sport that had defined my life for the previous ten years— and take up cross country running. This was wholly unexpected, as I had spent most of freshman year wondering how anybody could enjoy the sport. I thought it was for kids who couldn’t handle a real sport. There was no ball, no goal, no net, no endzone; no real point except to run mindlessly for miles on end. I didn’t join cross country because I thought I’d enjoy it. I only joined because I was in reasonably good shape and wanted something to do after school.

I was sure I would hate it. The idea of waking up with the sunrise and running three, four, eight, ten miles a day sickened me. Cross country seemed to be just a long, boring, excruciating experience, filled with misery, pain, and torment. Nevertheless, at seven o’clock the next morning I was up and ready to run.

With a practiced hand, I drop a handful of cinnamon sticks into the pot. A cup of sugar follows quickly.

I soon noticed an unexpected change. The more exhausted I became after running long distances, the more refreshed I was the next day. I became livelier than I already was, more energetic. Instead of waking up tired and groggy, I would get out of bed sore, but feeling surprisingly rejuvenated.

I met one of my best friends running cross country. Talking and laughing about everything from The Lord of the Rings to girls to how miserable the sport was, we’d while away the long miles. Sometimes we would break into raucous chorus, singing snatches of songs we knew, running in time with the beat. Soon enough, I began to almost enjoy practice. Not that the running was any easier.  Cross country was still a grueling sport, but the refreshing qualities of sustained exercise and the friendships that developed through those long miles sweetened the experience, made pain of endless miles a bit easier to bear.

I smile appreciatively as the fragrant aroma of cinnamon and ginger fills the room. I pull the stems off a few dried persimmons. A sweet fruit, the persimmons must be allowed to steep overnight to allow its honeyed flavor to permeate the drink.

It took hundreds of miles, but I finally began to see the fruit of my labor. I ran mile after mile after mile and was disappointed to see very little drop in my race times. Many miles and many hours later, however, I began to note with pride that my pace was slowly but surely improving. And gradually, I began to notice another effect, something that didn’t affect just my running career but my life as a whole. In cross country, unless you’re one of the fastest runners in the state (which I’m not), you’re basically competing against yourself. The coach can yell all he wants, but in the last 800 meters of the race, only you can push yourself beyond the point of utter exhaustion to finish the race strong. The self-discipline and the value of finishing strong I learned from running that last half mile began to seep into the rest of my life.

This wonderful Korean beverage, cold, but with a warm flavor, sweet, but with a sharp kick, is a blend of perplexing opposites. And yet it all works. I never thought cross country would be an experience I’d enjoy. And yet, as I sit, savoring this traditional Korean beverage, I reflect that maybe in life, a little bit of ginger is not such a bad deal after all.

에세이 샘플 3 (국내일반고, GPA 3.9, SAT 1650 (리딩 380), UC Davis, UC Irvine 합격, Rochester 대기자명단)

Prompt #1 (freshman applicants)

Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

When I was growing up, I lived with my great grandmother who was a painter in her days. While looking at her paintings and her art collection, I could see they were beautiful to look at, although I didn’t fully understand what the pieces were saying. Through such exposure to Korean art, I vaguely became aware of the concept of beauty.

I also painted by myself, trying to copy my great grandmother’s work. But as time went by, I started painting my own impressions and feelings that I got from her art pieces. What I enjoyed the most then was getting praised for my work from her. With the praise, she also taught me that painting was not just an act of labor and technical skills, but also a mental activity. She even said that painting was comparable to a highly intellectual activity, which I couldn’t fully understand at the time. It was through these interactions with my great grandmother that I decided to always have art as a part of my life.

During my teenage years, I visited as many exhibitions and art museums as I could. While my friends preferred going to amusement parks with their friends and boyfriends, I went to Insa-dong and Samchung-dong, places in Seoul where many art galleries were located, to appreciate art works and then walk into one of the small street cafes to reflect on art and artists, as well as write notes on my thoughts I acquired that day. Once in a while, I made sure that I attended grand exhibitions at major art facilities such as the Art Center in Seoul, where major art exhibitions of artists like Shagal, Monet, Klimt, and Andy Warhol were held. Through all these activities, I have developed a strong inclination toward studying the meaning of art and beauty in college.

Another interest I have formed was studying the story behind each art work. Just as my great grandmother told me her stories contained in each of her paintings, so I have been curious on why Klimt drew those incomprehensible patterns in expressing sensual love between a man and a woman. Although I may not know the basis for his drawings, I am sure that it has to do with many aspects of his background -- his nationality, ethnicity, religion, or philosophy. And the more I dug into the story, the more I understood the work. Now, when I look at an art piece, I see myself drifting away from the piece, and entering into another window through which I could see the life and thoughts of the artist. In university, I would like to expand my understanding of art by studying art history of the world so that I can understand how the world thinks about art and beauty.

Prompt #2 (all applicants)
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

“Mommy, since you’re going to buy me these anyways, can I have something else for my birthday? Birthday presents should be something exciting, not something I need every day.”

This is what I said to my mother when she bought me pajamas and socks for my 5th birthday. My mother said she was a bit surprised to hear something like that coming from a 5-year old. Since then, she paid close attention to my words and thoughts, and respected my opinion whenever possible. I think because of her, I was able to develop my distinct personality.

One time in grade school, my teacher gave the class an assignment which was to bring something through which one can express oneself. Some brought papers and crayons to draw themselves and some brought musical instruments to play. I, to everyone’s surprise, made a picture album filled with pictures from my past, a drawing about my future years in middle school and high school, and finally a poem about my life as a mother and grandmother. To the startled teacher and classmates I explained that I wanted to show my friends my past since they had not seen my past and also express my future since nobody knew what my future would be. I didn’t work on my present state because they see me every day. After my explanation, there was a short silence in the classroom. Then my teacher, with a great smile, thanked me for sharing a unique perspective.

Then in high school, I experienced a similar incident. In our music class, we were tested on the song “Memory” from the musical Cats. While many of the students tried their best to mimic opera or musical singers in order to get high scores in technical points, I sang the way I wanted to. As soon as I started singing, there were giggles among my classmates, who pointed fingers at me as if I was making a fool out of myself. I was disturbed by the commotion for a second, wondering if I should continue. But I thought whatever the result may be, I should finish what I had started. When I came back to my seat, some classmates remarked, “Why did you sing like a little kid? It’s supposed to be classical singing!” Just like them, I was really worried about my performance. At the end, however, something shocking happened. When the scores were released, I ended up being the only one with an A+ in the entire school. My music teacher explained that I was the only one with my own color while others were all trying to mimic what they thought the song should sound like.

Throughout my life, I have become firmer in maintaining my own color not only in my expressions through art but also in the way I think. And in whatever I do, I will not give up my unique color. I don’t think that I am special or better than others. I just think that my spectrum of color is as useful as others’ and that I need to keep that spectrum, as many things in life are made possible through the combination of many different colors.

에세이 샘플 2 (유학생, GPA 3.3, SAT 1940 - Case Western, BU 합격, Emory 대기자명단)

어렸을 적 할머니에게 의지하며 자라다가 청소년기 때 할머니를 멀리하게 되었다는 내용. 결국 나중에 치매에 걸리신 할머니를 통해 할머니의 사랑을 깨달은 내용. 아주 특이하지도 않은 주위에서 흔히 볼 수도 있는 가족 얘기지만, 이런 잔잔하고 감성적인 에세이로 학생이 성숙해 가는 과정을 보여주는 에세이도 좋은 에세이다.

Her Hand

“Always hold your grandma’s hand, Sohee.”

Day in and day out, this was what I constantly heard from my parents. Both of my parents worked when I was little, so they always made sure that I stuck right next to my grandma all the time while they were gone. My grandma was my storyteller, chef, friend, and navigator of my life. She was always with me, always did anything for me, and always loved me. Wherever there was grandma, there was a way. At that age, I thought things would be always the same between her and me.

As she got older, her body weakened and after one surgery, her health deteriorated significantly. After being released from the hospital, she would mostly lie down at home, not being able to walk around. I was busy with school, and naturally, we had less time to chat and do things together. Moreover, as I grew older, I had more “important” things to do with my friends, than with my grandma. I would even shy away from her, since her withered voice was no more like the pleasant one I heard when I was little. I didn’t like the “old” grandma nor did I need her for a friend, her guidance. I no longer needed her hand. Things now had changed.

When she was finally able to walk around, a time when the food I prepared for myself was becoming more palatable to me than her food, the first place she paid visit to was my room.

“Sohee?”

I didn’t reply, and just kept doing my thing with my back facing her. Soon I felt her approaching and her soft hand on my shoulder.

“Sohee, did you eat?”

I was amazed how light and skeletal her hand was. I was afraid to turn my head. Perhaps due to the shame from shunning her while she was in bed and selfishly minding my own fun and exciting world, I couldn’t face her directly. As if she had known what was going through my head, she slowly turned away and left my room, quietly closing the door. She didn’t come back for a while, and all I could hear was a short, intermittent clangor coming from the kitchen. And then after a moment of silence, the door opened again.

“Sohee, dinner’s ready.”

On my way to the dining table, feeling as if the whole year of my selfishness and neglect were flashing by me, I was filled with regret, self-reproach, and mostly disappointment at myself. For the first time in one year, we sat together across the table. I ate without a word. That night, I took my pillow to her room, and slept in her bosom.

Because of her health, she was no longer able to do things on her own. It wasn’t she who helped me get dressed, but it was I who helped her get dressed. It wasn’t she who helped me out of my high chair, now it was I who helped her get off her chair. I finally realized, it was now my turn to take her hand.

She is now suffering from Alzheimer. She doesn’t recognize anybody but the only name she does is Sohee. Whenever I come back home for vacation, she would make every effort to get up and greet me at the front door and ask me where I had been, while tightly holding my hand.

에세이 샘플 1 (미국공립, GPA 4.3/5.0, ACT 34, Carlton $54,000 장학금)

에세이가 당락에 결정은 안 하지만, 학생의 수준에 맞는 에세이가 나와야 불이익을 조금이라도 덜을 수가 있다. 아래 예는 Carlton College에 전액장학금을 받고 입학한 학생의 에세이다. 자기 동생에게서 교훈을 얻어 본인이 어떻게 변화했는지에 대한 내용이다. (추후 번역본을 만들면 다시 게재할 것임.)

Whoo…whoo…whoo.” I looked up just as I finished watering our lawn and noticed that the confident exhaling was coming from Mark, my younger brother. He was on the pull-up bar in the garage cranking repetitions like it was his job. Impressed, I thought to myself, Wow. I’d never seen someone do pull ups with such ease, and coming from Mark, this was especially humbling. I thought back to when we were little kids, when climbing the staircase was a challenge for him. 

When it came to sports or anything physical, Mark could have been in the thesaurus for frail or spindly. He was rarely a force or even simply mediocre in any of the camps or teams he participated in. Even with all the musical instruments he tried, Mark didn’t follow through with any of them. Consequently, I often felt he lacked the determination and toughness to excel in any endeavor that required more than a naturally gifted brain.  

Mark’s remarkable transformation, however, began in 2009, just after he turned fourteen.  Our uncle, a fitness buff, introduced him to a workout regimen on a special exercise machine requiring ten repetitions of pull-ups, dips, and leg lifts. At the time, Mark struggled to do even two pull-ups, but he took on our uncle’s challenge. During his workout, Mark chalked a tally mark on the garage wall next to him to keep track of his sets. He set a monthly goal to increase his set number by four and proceeded to do just that without missing a day. Eventually Mark peaked at 32 sets of each exercise, an unbelievable feat for anyone.

Although I was superior to Mark in all things athletic, I possessed a weakness that was as much a defining aspect of me as physical inferiority was for Mark. Public speaking has always been a challenge and a great source of anxiety for me. Ever since I can remember, I hated getting up to give speeches or act in a play. In group projects, I scrambled to be the one who did the most research or organized the team overall so I wouldn’t have to speak as much. I scheduled my English class so that it would be my first class of the day. That way I’d get my speeches over with as soon as possible. As much as I tried to avoid it, though, public speaking remained a part of my education that would not go away.

Last year, my English class concluded its unit on transcendentalism with a major writing project to be presented to the class in the form of a speech.  Although I was fascinated by Emerson and Thoreau and aced the written portion of the project, the speech requirement was another Marker. Halfway through my speech, I blanked out and just stood there frozen in front of the class.  I tried desperately to recall what I’d planned to say but nothing came. I finally took the unimaginable, humiliating step of asking the teacher if I could finish the speech the next day.  All this happened despite my intensive preparation, practicing in front of the mirror and before my family in the days leading up to the speech. At that moment, an escape to a life on Walden Pond by myself, in solitude, would have been the best gift imaginable. I managed to wrap up my speech, but I was very disappointed by my performance.
            
That night after soccer practice, I remember getting out of the car in the garage to put my equipment away. I walked to the container near Mark’s dip machine, dropped my soccer ball off, and then suddenly fixed my gaze on the wall in front of me. Although I’d seen these tally marks for almost a year now, I stared in amazement at the sheer number of marks on the wall and it hit me. All of sudden, I understood. I saw how remarkably Mark had transformed and the reason for it was staring me in the face. Each tally mark corresponded to a set of exercises completed, which corresponded to being one tally mark stronger and more powerful than before.

The before and after change in Mark was astonishing, but I knew the transformation did not occur immediately. Only after nearly a year did the workouts begin to pay off for him and become obvious to me. I realized, then, that I needed to learn from Mark, that I needed tally marks on the wall for my own “frail” area. Every speech or presentation would be like one of Mark’s workouts. I would struggle at first, but with each speech or presentation, I would be one tally mark closer to becoming less fearful, less nervous. Seeing my brother change over time inspired me to seek a similar remarkable change in me. Through the remainder of that semester, I gave many speeches; some okay, but many still quite disappointing.

This year in my AP Biology class, I have already given five presentations and have prepared for them with greater purposefulness.  Small changes like speaking more deliberately or taking deeper breaths has allowed me to taste some success for the first time. Most recently, I gave a presentation about a Kansas State University Professor, Mark Haub, and his famous “Twinkie diet.” The moment I finished, I knew something was radically different. I had spoken clearly and confidently, with a level of authority I’d never shown in previous speeches. In fact, I received extra credit for the way I handled my classmates’ questions and my teacher was intrigued enough by my presentation to ask a few questions of his own. I was thrilled because I no longer felt paralyzed. I thought of the tally marks that now covered my “wall” of progress and knew that I had Mark to thank for each one of them.

2013. 6. 4.

SAT/ACT 어느 시험이 유리할까?

한 학부모님께서 위의 질문을 주셨다. 그 답변 내용을 여기에 옮겨본다.

"일단 SAT는 쉽게 말해서 아이가 얼마나 "똑똑한가"를 테스트하는 거고 (논리력, 분석력, 어휘력 등) ACT는 아이가 얼마나 학교 공부를 "열심히했나"를 테스트한다고 (학교생활 충실히 했나) 볼 수 있습니다. 그리고 가장 큰 차이 중 하나는 SAT가 단어를 테스트한다는 거죠. ACT의 가장 큰 어필 중의 하나는 아이들이 단어 공부를 SAT만큼 안 해도 된다는 겁니다. 그다음 어필은 독해 문제가 분석력을 SAT만큼 필요로 하지 않는다는 겁니다.

이런 상황에서 SAT/ACT를 처음 준비하려는 학생은 어떻게 하는 것이 좋은가? 나중에 어떤 시험을 보든지 지금은 SAT를 시작하는 것이 좋습니다. 왜냐하면, 한국 부모님께서 잘못 생각하시는 것이 SAT나 ACT를 그냥 대학 가기 위한 점수로만 아시는데, 가만 생각해보면 그 많은 시간과 돈을 들여서 SAT, ACT를 공부하여 높은 점수 하나만 얻으면(영어실력과는 관계없이) 너무 허무하죠. SAT, ACT를 준비하면서 영어공부를 해서 영어 실력도 쌓아야 그 시간과 돈이 아깝지가 않고 대학 가서도 도움이 되죠. 그런데 ACT 공부는 영어실력을 향상하는데 SAT만큼의 효과가 없습니다. 말씀드렸다시피 ACT는 학교 공부 열심히 하면서 나중에 연습문제 풀어서 시험 보면 고득점 얻기가 SAT만큼 어렵지 않습니다. ACT는 시험이 아주 길어서 집중력을 유지하는 게 어렵지 문제나 어휘는 어렵지가 않습니다.

하지만 SAT 공부는 좀 다르죠. 우선 SAT에서 외우는 단어는 대학과 그 이후에도 사용하게 될 많은 단어가 있습니다. 영어신문 사설을 보면 SAT 단어가 종종 나옵니다. 그 이유는 SAT에서 테스트하는 단어는 어른이 쓰는 단어입니다. 그래서 해두면 좋다는 거죠. 또 독해도 ACT보다 어려우니 아이가 머리를 많이 써야 합니다. 이런 게 사실 아이의 영어실력과 독해력에 도움이 많이 됩니다.

그리고 제일 중요한 것은 아이의 성향입니다. 한쪽 시험을 선호하면 그 시험을 보면 됩니다. 제 경험상 보통 공부하기 어려워하는 아이들이 주로 ACT를 봅니다. 그리고 공부를 잘하는 아이들은 오히려 SAT 포맷을 더 선호합니다. 왜냐하면, 일단 지루하지 않고 짧은 섹션 여러 개로 구성되어있고 (ACT는 영어가 45분에 75문제, 수학이 60분에 60문제, 독해가 35분에 40문제 등 한 섹션이 길고 문제가 많죠.) 또 패턴을 잘 익히면 답을 고를 수가 있는데 ACT는 시험이 그냥 길고 아주 지루합니다.

현실적인 솔루션은 SAT로 공부를 시작해서 나중에 정말 나는 SAT는 어렵고 하기 싫다고 하면 그때 ACT로 바꿔도 됩니다. 이거는 단순히 원서에 적을 시험점수를 위해서 임시방편으로 하는 거죠. 과거 제 학생 중에 SAT가 계속 2100을 못 넘었던 학생이 12학년 올라가서 10월에 ACT를 쳐서 32점(SAT로 하면 약 2100 중반대)이 나왔었습니다. 대체로 ACT를 보면 SAT 점수로 환산했을 때 최고로 올라봐야 100점이라고 보시는 게 적당할 겁니다. 그러니 우리 아이가 SAT가 2000인데 ACT를 보면 혹시 SAT 환산점수로 2200+가 나올까 하는 기대는 할 수가 없습니다.

마지막으로 제가 우려하는 건, 아이나 부모나 모두 힘드니까 쉬운 ACT로 가자는 생각은 그렇게 현명한 선택이라고 보이지 않습니다. 사실 ACT리딩은 SAT리딩만큼 가르칠 게 많지는 않습니다. 같이 읽고 해석해주면 됩니다. 이렇듯 ACT는 준비하는 게 별로 어렵지 않으니 제 생각에는 SAT를 준비해서 영어실력을 많이 쌓고, 나중에 원서상 필요한 점수를 위해서 ACT를 보는 것이 더 현명한 선택이라고 보여집니다."

추가로, ACT가 SAT보다 점수 내기가 조금 더 쉬운 건 사실이다. 그렇다고 ACT가 결코 쉬운 시험은 아니다. 내가 영어실력이 부족해서 ACT를 본다고 문제가 쉽게 해결 되는 건 아니다. ACT, SAT 다 열심히 공부해야 한다는 걸 명심하자.

인터넷과 각 학원에서 SAT/ACT에 대해 많은 얘기를 한다. 특히 요즘 ACT 시험응시가 증가추세에 있고 SAT 불법문제 유출 등 문제가 많다. 하지만 그 모든 것을 종합해서 이렇게 생각하면 간단하다.

"SAT를 시작하다가 나중에 ACT로 바꾸기는 쉽다. 하지만 ACT를 하다가 나중에 SAT로 바꾸기는 어렵다 (혹 ACT 포맷이 아이에게 안 맞을 수도 있다). 그때는 SAT 시작하기가 더 힘들어진다."

2013. 6. 3.

입학사정 주요 평가요소

NACAC (National Association for College Admission Counseling, 전국 대학입학 카운셀링 연합)에서 작년 말에 나온 연례보고서 내용 중, 입학사정관들이 중요하게 생각하는 평가 항목의 조사 결과가 있다.

우선 예상했던 바와 같이 학교 성적이 제일 중요하다. 대학준비 과목 성적과 과목 난이도가 제일 중요하고, 그다음으로 GPA와 SAT/ACT 점수다. "매우 중요"에서는 SAT/ACT 점수가 GPA보다 높게 책정되었지만, "매우 중요"와 "중요"를 합치면 GPA가 91.1%, SAT/ACT가 88.8%다. 근소한 차이라고 볼 수 있지만, GPA가 더 중요하다는 걸 볼 수 있다. 또 주요 과목 성적, 과목의 난이도 이 모든 것이 GPA와 연결이 되므로 역시 학교 내신이 제일 중요하다는 걸 알 수 있다. 그래서 필자는 늘 조기유학생에게 추천하는 것이 명문고에서 중간하느니 중위권 학교에서 탑을 하라는 거다.


평가항목매우 중요중요조금 중요중요하지 않음
대학준비과목 성적84.311.92.31.5
과목의 난이도67.720.45.86.2
SAT/ACT 점수59.229.66.94.2
총 GPA51.939.26.91.9
에세이24.937.517.220.3
학과 관심20.529.724.725.1
카운셀러 추천서19.239.827.213.8
학교 등수18.83131.418.8
선생님 추천서16.541.926.515
AP, IB 점수6.931.231.530.4
포트폴리오6.612.830.250.4
인터뷰6.225.425.842.7
SATII 점수5.49.722.662.3
과외활동543.138.113.8

<추가분석>
위 조사를 조금 더 이해가 쉽도록 하기 위해, 표에서 "매우 중요"와 "중요"를 합치고 높은 순위부터 나열해보겠다. 그러면 입학사정관이 중요하게 여기는 항목과 그렇지 않은 항목이 확연히 구분될 거다.


평가항목매우 중요 + 중요
대학준비과목 성적96.2
총 GPA91.1
SAT/ACT 점수88.8
과목의 난이도88.1
에세이62.4
카운셀러 추천서59
선생님 추천서58.4
학과 관심50.2
학교 등수49.8
과외활동48.1
AP/IB 점수38.1
인터뷰31.6
포트폴리오19.4
SAT II 점수15.1

이렇게 바꿔놓고 보니 구분이 좀 더 명확해진 것 같다. 우선 위 4개 항목은 (대학준비 과목 성적, 총 GPA, SAT/ACT 점수, 과목 난이도) 퍼센트가 그 이하 항목들보다 월등히 높다. 그래서 이 4개 항목이 제일 중요한 "항목그룹"으로 볼 수가 있다. 이것을 "제1 항목그룹"이라고 하자.

그다음으로 중요한 "항목그룹"으로 에세이, 카운셀러 추천서, 선생님 추천서 등에서 과외활동까지라고 볼 수 있다. 이걸 "제2 항목그룹"이라고 하자.

그리고 맨 마지막 "제3 항목그룹"이 AP/IB 점수, 인터뷰, 포트폴리오, 그리고 SATII 점수이다. 그럼 여기서 몇 가지 주요 포인트를 체크해보자.

1. 정량적 평가 우선, 정성적 평가 나중
필자기 보기에는 이렇게 "항목그룹"으로 지어 이 조사결과를 보는 것이 이해가 더 쉽게 되는 거 같다. 결국, 지금까지 생각했던 대로 학교성적과 SAT/ACT 시험 점수 등 제1 항목그룹으로 일단 학생의 학업능력을 체크하고, 그다음에 에세이와 추천서 등의 제2 항목 그룹으로 학생의 인격적인 면에 대해 살펴보는 거다. 그래서 이 학생은 공부는 이만큼 잘하는데, 그 외에 인격적으로 끌리는 면은 없는지 보는 거다.

2. 학교 등수가 별로 중요하지 않네?
여기서 한 가지 의외인 것은 "학교 등수"가 생각했던 것보다 순위가 낮다는 거다. 이는 여러 이유가 있을 수 있겠지만, 일단 학교 등수는 많은 경우 미국 고등학교나 국내 특목고에서 공개를 안 하며, 또 학교별 수준 차가 많이 있어 아주 크게 비중을 두기가 위험하다고 생각해서 그 중요도가 생각보다 낮게 나온 것이라고 보인다. 그러나 어느 학교이건 상위 10% 이내에 들어야 명문대를 가는 건 거의 정해져 있다고 보아야 한다.

3. 과외활동 비중이 낮네?
또 한 가지 중요한 사실은, 과외활동의 비중이 추천서보다 낮다는 거다. 특히 최근에 우리나라 학생 사이에 붐처럼 일어난 것이 화려한 과외활동 스펙쌓기였는데, 이 조사를 보면 생각보다 비중이 낮게 나온 것을 알 수가 있다.그렇기 때문에 과외활동은 양보다는 질을 생각해서 준비 해야 한다.

4. SATII 점수의 비중이 최하위???
SATII 점수가 최하위로 나온 것은 많은 한국 부모를 놀라게 할 거다. SATII는 대부분 대학의 필수 요구사항이므로 무조건 봐야 한다. 그런데 그 점수가 차지하는 비중이 최하위로 나온 이유는 무엇일까? SATII Math 2C 점수가 750이나 800이나 크게 작용하지 않는다는 거다. 과거 필자의 학생은 SATII Math 2C에서 680, SATII Chem에서 660을 맞고도 Cornell 화학과에 입학했다. SATII는 열심히 해서 준비해야 한다. 하지만 수학, 과학 과목은 750+면 된다. 한국 학생에게 US History는 700+면 잘 한 거고, 외국어도 700+면 아주 잘한 거다. 외국어는 (물론 한국어는 제외) 650대도 나쁜 점수가 아니다. 그러니 SATII 점수 조금 더 올리려고 준비를 하는 학생은 반드시 전문가와 상담을 받고 재시험을 치러야 하는지 결정해야 한다. 시간 낭비를 하지 않기 위해서.

마지막으로, 이번 보고서에 보면 입학사정관의 업무가 날로 늘어나고 있다고 한다. 보통 사립대학은 입학사정관 한 명당 평균 400명 이상 심사를 하고, 주립대학은 인당 1,200명 정도라고 한다. 그래서 필자가 이전 칼럼에서 에세이를 쓸 때 제일 주의해야 하는 것이 내가 얼마나 "착하게" 보일 것인지에 중점을 두어야 한다고 했던 거다. 이 과다한 업무에 시달리는 입학사정관을 에세이를 읽고 짜증나게 하지 말자는 거다. 또한, 미국 고등학교에 카운셀러가 담당하는 학생 수가 너무나 많다. 그래서 카운셀러가 다 알아서 잘해줄 거라는 기대는 하지 않는 게 좋다. 학교에서 탑이 아니면 그렇게 많이 신경을 써주지 못한다. 역시 이 부분 때문에 필자는 누차 카운셀러와 관계를 좋게 가져야 한다고 말해왔었다.